Twins!

Submitted by Jamie on Mon, 04/23/2007 at 12:44am.

Phil woke me up last Sunday night at 2 AM in a panicky, cold sweat.

"I think I need to go to the hospital!" he blurted to my prone, drooling form.

"WHOSiWHATtheAREyouOK?!!???" I managed to snarfle in response.

"No, I have this weird pain (insert embarrassing personal info here), but it won't go away!"

"OK, let's go downstairs and get some stuff together, and if you aren't feeling better by then, we'll go," I responded, thinking that we'd stuff him full of Advil and I would be able to go back to my dream about the perfect lesson plan. It became clear after 10 minutes of me trying to find some shoes, my purse, some real pants and the keys to my car that he was in serious pain and we were indeed headed to the ER.

I ran 4 red lights and paused twice for Phil to dry-heave out the window (strange memories of trips to Burney drifted through my foggy, sleep-deprived mind). When we finally made it to the hospital, he barely made it out of the car before being sick in the nice landscaping outside of the entrance. As my siblings, my mother, and my poor Aunt Charlotte's old MR2 know, I make a regular occurrence of being sick - keeps things interesting, you know? However, this was the first time in 10 years poor Phillip threw up! Now we knew something was seriously wrong.

After signing in at the desk, we joined a snoring vagrant in the overheated waiting room at lovely Emanuel hospital. As we came bearing a heating pad and our own blanket, the nurse must have recognized us as actual patients and not just temporary residents seeking thrice-heated food and possibly narcotics. We were (thankfully) swiftly seen and taken back to an exam room.

Although the exam room was nice, Phillip felt much more comfortable in close reach of the toilet. So while he was otherwise detained, I stood guard outside the loo listening to the melodious sounds that accompany the witching hour at an Emergency Department. I kept tabs on his doctor, nurse, and test specimens like an air traffic controller from this position, informing them that he was holding court in the facilities, not his room. Finally a test confirmed blood in his urine, so they set him up with an IV and some pain medication before sending him off to a CT scan.

"Sir, this might hurt - try to hold still while we insert the IV," said Andrew, our very relaxed nurse who looked like a Dave Matthews Band fan.

"Needles don't bother me, and I'm fairly sure nothing can really 'hurt' compared to this pain," says poor Phillip, writhing in his efforts to hold still for the IV and also not come out of his skin in agony.

"Give him 15 of Dilotid and 5 of Phenergan," uttered Dr. Aloysius Fobi (Aloe-ish-us FOE-bee), god of medicine and pain relief, and possible namesake of at least one of our children. “It seems as though you might have a kidney stone, Mr. Incorvia. Now you will be in the unique position of truly empathizing with your future wife when she’s in labor.”

"Whoa," slurred Phillip. "That's good schtuffhhhghgh..."

Finally relieved of pain and nausea, Phillip was relaxed. Ever a modest man, Phillip was now reclining with his hands behind his head and his legs sprawled, boxer briefs, delicate hospital gown, and a big smile enough cover for him. As he was wheeled toward the CT scanner, he grinned and waved at the collection of staff gathered at the nurses' station who had previously only seen the back of his head as he paced to and from the john.

"Hello!" he offered cheerfully. "I feel much better now!"

Smiles and chuckles all around.

"That is my favorite person in the whole world!" he announced, pointing at Andrew, heroic nurse, bearer of all good opiates, and (I suspect) fan of a good jazz flute solo.

"Feeling better, Mr. Incorvia?" inquired our amused, yet stately doctor as we rounded the corner toward the scan room.

“Ohhh yeeaah…!” proclaimed Phillip, seemingly as gilded by Dilotid as the mortals were by Puck’s interfering love potion.

“You, sir, are a cheap date,” replied Dr. Fobi, shaking his head bemusedly.

The CT scan was like a giant metallic donut. Phillip was placed on a bed that slid right through the hole of said donut, taking pictures of his insides as tiny “slices.” While I felt that we were close before this momentous occasion, never have I felt that I knew Phillip more or better than when I was peering over the shoulder of the CT tech taking a tour of his insides from armpits to hipbones. Weird.

“Yep,” intoned the tech, “it’s a kidney stone alright.”

When we returned to the exam room, Dr. Fobi informed us that there was good news and there was bad news.

“The good news is that the stone that’s causing you so much pain is about to leave your kidney,” he informed us. “It won’t cause you any more pain once it gets to your bladder. However, the bad news is – you have another stone in the same kidney! I’m prescribing enough pain meds to get you through passing both stones. Looks like you’re having twins! Now go home, get some rest, and give birth!”

Well, Phillip and I are glad to say that one “child” has made its way into the world. Now we are eagerly awaiting the birth of its twin.

» posted in Jamie's blog

Comments:

by jennlynne - 5 years ago
Noth Pole United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 1355
Oh poor Phillip -if I wasn't laughing so hard I might be able to call and offer a more fitting apology. However, congrats on the twins..hope all goes well and might you never have a "child" again!
by Valorie - 5 years ago
Orange County United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 13594

Now that is a creative writing.  I do feel bad for Phillip but like jen it seems my concern was distracted as I was in awe at what a writer you are.  You definitely are in the "write" profession.  I hope you offer this to your students as an example of what is possible.  As I read the descriptions it totally brought me back to the classroom and the teacher assigning a paper requesting we use certain adjectives and adverbs to make our work come alive.  Glad you took the time to share this with us on TF.  And give Phillip my sympathies. 

by hseverson - 5 years ago
Portland, OR United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 2273
Poor Phil!  I hope he is feeling better soon.  At least there will be no stretch marks or stitches!  I agree with Valorie-you are an amazing writer, Jamie!  Can't wait until Alyssa reads this.  Maybe it will rekindle her interest in writing.
by geoff - 5 years ago
Fountain Valley, CA United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 11604
ugh, i just don't ever want this to happen to me.
by Blueidjode - 5 years ago
St. George, UT United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 7013
Yes, I'm sorry, it's hard to feel bad for Phillip and enjoy Jamie's creative writing at the same time!  I love every detail.  Poor Phillip! 
by Chaco - 5 years ago
LO - aka The Bubble United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 3068
Hope Phil feels better soon. Both of Brent's brothers have had multiple kidney stones. I remember that Brad has had some kind of treatment where (and I may have some details wrong here!) he sits in a bathtub like thing and they treat him with some kind of rays that break down the kidney stones. Hows that for a technical description? Anyway, too bad they can't do that with Phil so he wouldn't have to go through the agony of passing another one.
by Aimee - 5 years ago
Portland OR United States
Member Since: Feb 2007
Member Points: 5646
Jamie, your ER visit is much more interesting than my recent one. Poor Phil! I hope he never has to deal with another kidney stone.
by Jay - 5 years ago
San Jose United States
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Member Points: 4266
If I ever have need of a writer, I know where to go!  Thanks for sharing.
by Brandt - 5 years ago
Orinda, CA United States
Member Since: Feb 2007
Member Points: 1867

Absolutely wonderful narrative!  Jamie, I'm so proud to be a fellow English Major!

Oh, and tell Phil  . . . Bummer about the stone, Man.

by Sean - 5 years ago
Beaverton United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 8412
Man, I've been there.  Twice.  Those things hurt.
by Jamie - 5 years ago
Portland, OR United States
Member Since: Apr 2007
Member Points: 645
Thanks for all the compliments on my writing and well wishes for Phil's "progeny." This whole episode has only reinforced his joy in being an only child.
by cboop444 - 5 years ago
North Plains Oregon United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 309
Your writing is amazing, and I do hope Phil feels better soon.
by emmybass - 5 years ago
Central Point, OR United States
Member Since: Mar 2007
Member Points: 492
I never thought reading about kidney stones could be so exciting. Great story telling, Jamie.
by BenMike - 5 years ago
Portland United States
Member Since: Feb 2007
Member Points: 69
"pointing at Andrew, heroic nurse, bearer of all good opiates, and (I suspect) fan of a good jazz flute solo." 
Buahaha jazz flute solo, I love it.
So have you guys picked out names for the little ones?
by Chris - 5 years ago
Orinda, CA United States
Member Since: Apr 2007
Member Points: 640

Sorry I'm joining late.  I'll throw in my medical two cents.  Phil's opiate/love potion is Dilaudid.  He would have gotten a bit less than 15mg, though.  Chaco was talking about lithotripsy.  Good for breaking up big stones that don't pass on their own but, as Phil found out, it's the small ones that move quickly that really hurt. 

I love taking care of patients with kidney stones.  They come in seriously hurting and leave feeling much better with a firm diagnosis.  Mission accomplished. 

by Valorie - 5 years ago
Orange County United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 13594
Sounds like a good specialization for a doctor--kidney stones.
by Floyd - 4 years ago
Sherwood United States
Member Since: Mar 2007
Member Points: 184
Wow - I am way behind times in following these accounts for poor Phil - Here it is the 18th of July and I am just now responding!  Sorry about that -- will try to keep more in touch in the future.  Appreciated Jaimie's description and colorful account (now that it is behind us- at least I hope Phil will have no further births to report!! 
by Aimee - 2 years ago
Portland OR United States
Member Since: Feb 2007
Member Points: 5646

Has this blog really been read 720 times? It's way ahead of all the others in number of reads.

by jennlynne - 1 year ago
Noth Pole United States
Member Since: Jan 2007
Member Points: 1355
now this blog has been read more than 1,000 times. i am so proud of you Jame, and err Phil. since you are the basis of the story, i offer you my praise and sympathy all at the same time!
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